Mi Amore' No More

Fog, silence and freedom
I walk the emerald mile
The folded note beneath you
gives birth to my smile
I roll what's left behind me
few materials shall I need
Your desires for the others
quenched your thirst and greed
Take what I leave behind
burn to ashes if you must
My misery and anguish
are metal left to rust
These steps are my voice
you always did ignore
No longer will your insolence
abuse your Mi Amore'

Author's Note

One of my more liberating choices in life!

Reviews

[Jibey]

This poem explains a lot and speaks of a woman who walks away from an unfathful lover...and who has asserted herself at last in taking the steps that lead her away...

The writing flows strongly and confidently and the rhym is unobtrusive but like a glue to hold the words together...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is quite a stand.
Your words pierce the heart.

[Doreen]

Break free of those chains! Yes, wonderful and quite enlightening. Nice job.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is very powerful and filled with emotion, you brought me to tears, seriously.

[roarke]

Simple, precise, excellent metaphors.
Being able to write thus about those choices is very healing and strengthening.

I'll wager the one left doesn't understand the nuance of this eloquent write, so decision wisely made.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very beautiful!

[Karina Longo]

Wow. That's an intense piece. I like how it flows. Witty.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Those first two lines captivated me and reading through this poem such emotional turmoil but you are freed a phoenix reborn fantastic piece and good for you for not being held back
another great write by such talent

100/100