Ode, to the provocation of thee!

Written upon a single slip of paper a few years ago. It slipped out as I began to read a favorite old book of mine. Just thought I would share another of my "big word" poems.

Ode,
to the condensation
and violent exploration
of mine eyes

 

Rejuvenate thy wounds
Forego tragedy

 

Crawl from thy tomb
exude audacity

 

To love only thee
consumed condemnation

 

Greet thy soft lips
apperceive sweet exemption

 

Ode,
to the provocation
and lulled consolation
of thee

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

A wonderfully delicate flow of a write.
Few words with plenty to say. nicely done...

[Closed Account]

Great rhythm and wording.

[sarah]

This is amazing!

[E.H. Monroe]

this made me think..someone is seruiously pissed for getting their emotional toes stepped on. The fiery eyes, the crawling from the tomb, that ol feeling that never goes away.
spit it hardcore

diggin

[Doreen]

I hear a haunted love here - I have eyes only for you, type of thing. It has a chilling effect, in my opinion. I like this.

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Amazing word choice, great flow... it's amazing. You are incredibly talented!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

really liked this one great write

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

This is great, I love the words you chose, very creative.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Wonderfully written~

[D S Rollins]

Beautifully written. I love the alliteration of 'consumed condemnation', this is really nice.