The Colloquy Beneath

The impetus of delirium,

drills deep into my brain.
The drifting shadow provokes,

my opulence to strain.
Impetuous choice of words,

befuddle all mankind.
Disentangle my intent,

of the colloquy beneath the rhyme.
Incontrovertibly I say to thee,

I know thy true intent.
Entrée oh aberration,

because my mind is spent!

-Margaret

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

Flow is great, well worded, love that last line, it's a great "punch" or twist to wrap the piece up. I think many can relate to your thoughts.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Very well written and well thought out great use of vocabulary well done keep them coming

[D S Rollins]

Beautiful.

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. ah, brilliant ! ... exceptionally inspiring deployment of the word "aberration" ... and a powerful choice of poetic expressions throughout ...