My Angel

I hear the fluttering of your wings

through broken hearts and painful screams

The light breaks through the greying sky

In my heart my angel flies

One swift motion a comforting grasp

A sweeping of the broken glass

Once shattered life, once forgotten heart

I'm found in you, my life doth start

Never released from this grip so tight

forever in my endless night.

Reviews

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautifully written! The rhyme is also wonderful....Great job!~

[Moflo]

I like the rhymes in this poem, they really make it seem simple even though you say so much. Also the images you displayed were very clear to me, great job.

[Ashley Myers]

in ten lines theres so much power

[Doreen]

This is fantastic. It has a wonderful rhyme and rhythm and just rolls off the tongue. I love your word choices and descriptions.

[OT]

nice!! strong evocative images which resonate with us all in their different ways, you've left it open for interpretation so we can all read it in mind of our own situations! great poem!!