Locked Away

I sail this sea that has bequeathed my mind

upon this wooden door, still throughout time.

The lymerics and lyrics lap at my feet

as I reach for the note my fingertips meet.

"Within the pocket lies the unlocking key."

I look in the hole and see only me.

Perhaps I'll unleash this ocean someday

and share with the world a vast array.

Until then I'll lay cold, alone in defeat

as the lymerics and lyrics lap at my feet.

Reviews

[roarke]

I'd say, we should all start building an Ark. Definitely unleash that ocean Margaret, your work is solid stuff.

[Calypso]

So beautiful. The flow is respectable.

[Jessica Harmony]

I love the last line, 'as the lymerics and lyrics lap at my feet' i can almost picture someone sitting on the sand at a beach alone, with the water (or lymerics and lyrics) lapping at their feet. Just the imagery i got from that ;)

[OT]

it does have quite the whimsical feel to it!! flows well and quite dream like it's nice!

[D S Rollins]

Lovely rhyme and pattern. Nice.

[.]

I love the style and rhyme pattern..its a dreamlike feel and almost melancholy whimisical..gosh that a lot of things but really like the idea..