WHERE HAVE YOU GONE?

WHERE HAVE YOU GONE?

 

I can’t begin to express

As the words don’t come so easy

I somehow feel a little at a loss

On how you truly feel

 

You seem so distant

No wanting to be close

As we once upon a time were

What have I done wrong?

 

Please tell me darling

What it is I need to do

To bring you back home

Into my loving arms

 

For you see my darling

I love you more than words can say

Yet no matter what I do

I feel like you’re drifting further away

 

Perhaps it’s just me

But darling I’d like to know

Just how you truly feel

For I am just not sure anymore

 

Copyright 2009 Margaret Knuff

All rights reserved

Reviews

[Ladysue]

This was sad and full of uncertainty, but written beautifully. Very heartfelt.

[Mai Aliza]

I love this, i feel your pain, I feel your emotion; for I have suffered too.

[Luna]

I know this feeling and it can often be annoying. It is very nicely written and I can picture it. Good job.

[Shellie]

Oh my god, i feel so sad after reading this. Really well written. Intense is def the word. I hope if these feelings are true you;ll get there. x