Often

Reall random. It probably doesn't make any sense. I wrote it when I had too much to think about.

 

 

I often cry for silly reasons

from months and months ago

I often sigh whenever I think

"What if I hadn't said no?"

I often decide that the decicions I make

Are for the reason of the better.

But that doesn't explain why I said no,

And why I now regret it.....

Reviews

[WordMaster]

What a powerful poem for its size

Your emotions and feelings hit the reader right between the eyes

Exceptionally well done

[Rebecca Chamaillard]

Very secretive. You left a lot open to interpretation there, but also expressed very great emotion in your writing. I really liked reading it. I might recommend, however, changing the elipses at the very end. They kind of leave the end just hanging there a little more than necessary. The final statement of the story is a cliff hanger in itself, so the elipses just kind of exaggerates the point a bit.

All around, this is very well written and very insightful, but also very interpretive. I really enjoyed this.