River of Tears

Dreams will float away if you let them.

A river of tears

Carries the dust of dead dreams 

But fish fight the flow.

Reviews

[The_Jabberwock]

"carries the dust of dead dreams" amazing

[selkietales]

...I think this is my new favorite poem

I love the meaning :)

[Archia]

I love the idea of this, and how each line introduces a new element, it does make it a bit dream-like actually. It's really nice.

[Legolas]

Great haiku. I love the meaning of this. You are already writing better haikus than I do.

[Bare trees]

Nicely stated. A good Haiku.

[Nath]

This is really cool, I like the concept brought across in brevity. "Never give up." Wonderful work.

[Renée]

Great haiku!

[Sami Khalil]

Good poem.

[afra]

short but meaningful ...good job

[Corset]

Actually I think this might be one of the best haikus I've read in a long while, i love it.