My POV on life

Me ranting and raving on my opinion about life.

People say the world is changing

Everyday we are alive

But as I go about, I have no doubt

I don't buy that jive

The world has already changed

And not for the betterment of us all

People rob and lie, and the children begin to cry

Amidst all of this, it is difficult to stand tall

As I sit off to myself

I look at the people walking by

I realize that most don't care, as I continue to stare

My sanity begins to fry

It amazes me greatly

How one can cut the  strands

Connected to a friend who would have been there to the end

Alas! all is destroyed by my hands

Or so it appears to be

At this point in time

I do my best to be nice, but still haven't rolled the lucky dice

People treat me like I am grime

If that is the case

As it is this time around

I don't need them in my life, because I dont need the strife

For I am not yet being buried in the ground

Reviews

[quarintine_deathangel]

Agreeable 98.99% advancement of society is destructive and disgusting and yeah it kills off innocence like bedbugs or dodo birds. There's a side that recognizes those who are better than such actions and lifestyles though.And if youd run away from everyone because they aren't perfect or don't understand, you'll lose everyone in your life. Try teaching and explaining to people, if they understand or learn you don't end up losing everyone you care for or "growing apart" I think the idea is a load of... uhm anyway, ona personal sidenote 1. been there, done that, 2. I learned what should be done not a good place to hide, 3. I wrote a poem called [undefined] Look it up if you feel like it, kind of relates to this. I liked reading this, it was ponderable.

[EternityWolf101]

Sadly, this is true. the majority of human population have evolved into this grotesque mix of undesirable variables. If just makes me sick when I see how people act these days. Your poem might make some of them change their ways, unless they truly are brain-dead. Great poem.