Failure with Wonder

I haven't written anything in awhile but for some reason, i couldn't get the first two lines out if my head. So, i caved and wrote it andthe rest of itjust flew through me very easily.

Take me by the hand
to steady my head.
Hold me tightly
to face the wind that has failed
to drift beneath my wings,
as we soar into a pattern
of trespassing
through the gardens of hope.

In the awakening of flowers
dispersed along a path
made just for us,
there is such wonder
to where itwill take us
and the endless possibilities
as to which I am
willing to explore
only with your reflecton
in the iris of my eye.

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[Amber Lily]

Beautifully put. Failure is just an earlier attempt at success and I think you make that perfectly clear. I know it's hard not to write it once the idea is there, I'm glad you did! :)