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The Scar

The Scar

A Story by Mara-J
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Nikki has just been dumped by her very first boyfriend, Lucas. He leaves her for another girl and leaves Nikki in pieces. Nikki must now cope with her life without Lucas.

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She had a scar…not externally on her body, nor physically, but emotionally in her heart. For the first time in Nikki’s life, her very first boyfriend had left her. Her boyfriend’s name was Lucas, and he had left her for another girl whom she had loathed all her life. She felt alone and crushed…as soon as she heard the words, “I’m leaving you.” That scar had been permanently formed on her heart that day.

All she was able to think about for weeks was Lucas. Lucas was a big part of her life, and he crushed her for good. Being able to see him and his new girlfriend, Ann, together made her feel like nothing. Nikki didn’t know what to do to fix everything. None of the other guys liked her, and she had talked to her friends about it all the time but they were no good. She had to find a way to either fix it, or just move on.

After a long, sleepless night of thinking, Nikki had come up with an answer. She got ready for school and hurried onto the bus. She kept wondering about her plan through the bus ride and started questioning herself with, “Is this a good idea?” and “Will this work?” Of course! It had to! She walked into school and right up to where Lucas and Ann were. She stared right at Lucas, while he looked at her with a skeptical look. Then she slapped him across the face and said, “I sure hope you’re happy with what you’ve done to me!” Lucas was shocked. He then said to her, “Nikki, what the heck are you doing? I’m with Ann now. Don’t get so jealous.” Nikki was furious. All she wanted to do was go along with her plan and beat him. But, she thought about it again and thought, “No…that’s not right to do to Lucas.” She just walked away and said nothing else. And after her high school graduation, she never saw Lucas and Ann again.

© 2010 Mara-J


Author's Note

Mara-J
I did, indeed, use this for a school paper I had to write. But it doesn't matter to me, just as long as my readers enjoy it.

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Mara-J
Mara-J

Western Springs, IL



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My name is Marijean, but I prefer to be called Mara-J. I am 13 years of age and I, obviously, love to write stories. Not only that, I also love writing poetry and drawing. Anything that helps me expre.. more..

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