What our ancestor's started

Sorry, I got drunk. No, I'm not Sorry, f**k you who judge. This was an awesome concert.

There's nothing like having one too many drinks with friends.

Such joy there is to listen to an unknown rock band, in a forgotten bar

With their untune melody and even bass.

The room has fogged, and the words flow out from a broken dam.

The neon lights dance across our eyes, they almost hurt.

This is why we breath, we only continue what our ancestor's started

Reviews

[Ray cool]

It is nice when people find a place like that to do away with their emotions. So tomorrow will be right time to deal with them in less anger.

[Maple Ellen]

I was truly inspired that might, with my head cloudy from alcohol and music. I suppose I did have some anger from my previous frustrations from this past week. There is also something about being in a dark room with dog, with drums beating and the strum of strings. It awakens somethi n primal within all of us.

Thank you so much forbthe feedback!

[Ray cool]

Wow that's cool writing, honestley I love it.

[bluessadmood]

Yes it's always lovely to settle in some not so respectable places..not so clean..the air feels so heavy..the music so loud ,you just hear noises,head so heavy..with whoever..you don't even think why you are here..for your head is in the clouds..i ve lived these night..I could never forget
Lovely write

[Maple Ellen]

Precisely, that was the exact environment that I was in. It can be so envigorating whenever you let go and enjoy some booze while listening to amateur band. Thank you for the kind words, friend!

[bluessadmood]

Most welcome omega dear..anytime..I really loved your thoughts and words.

[Kittenincake]

I enjoyed this small poem a lot. I feel alive when I'm in a dirty place, filled with loud music and people dancing. I can relate to the freedom and connection that accompany the experience.

I think there's a typo in the first line. Is "to" meant to be "too"? Not sure if that was intentional. Perhaps it was, since the sentance is about getting too drunk.

[Maple Ellen]

Oh, you're right. I still a little tipsy from tonight.

[Kittenincake]

Sounds like a good time!

[Gee]

Although the early ones had not one hangover, ouch.
Great nights the ones with good company and flowing drink.
Enjoyed the read