The stop in the Styx, Part 1A Story by Maple EllenThis is just a short story I have been working on for the last month. I'm releasing it in parts, so I may take time with it, experimenting with certain subjects and word flow. I would love feedback!Morning walks to the bus stop were
usually uneventful for Jeff. The Sun would always glare in his eyes, the air
was either too humid or chilled, and whenever he would arrive at the grimy
post, there was an unpleasant stranger waiting patiently for him. But this
morning was proving to be oddly different. It was roughly 8:30 am, but the Sun
just peeked over the tree tops that were located about one mile from the stop,
the trees were planted by elected officials, to promote Earth day a few years
back. Jeff always thought they were shabby in appearance since landscaping in
his area was rarely performed. The area and the people were too poor. He
continued his slow trot, finish with the thought of the Sun, the bus stop
seemingly to be further than usual. Jeff began to feel sweat gather in the
crook of his elbows and under his armpits, he tugged his sleeves of his brown
sweater above elbows. The sleeves were awkwardly bundled, but Jeff ignored his
shyness. He blew out his breath to only
see it chilled in the air. The air around him was not humid, he was warm, but
still felt a chill in his bones. Another conundrum that Jeff shrugged off, in
his mind he knew this morning was not considered normal, but he didn’t seem to
mind it. The little things were wrong, but these could be easily overlooked. It
was the same path he walked for many years, which was an aged sidewalk that had
cracks growing throughout its structure, the sprouted about just like the weeds
that flourished within them. To Jeff, that was all that matter. As long as the
journey and destination were the same, he would ignore the outside forces that
were rebelling normality. It didn’t affect his outcome, which was to work his
job and return home to a beer. The
outline of the stop grew closer and he identified an awaited guest that would
soon make small talk, whom Jeff would reply with grunts and ‘mh-hmm’. Unconsciously,
he groaned, for Jeff was not a social man and despised any social interaction
that was not with his drinking buddy, Aaron or his dear old mom. Whom was stuck
at low income nursing home, since that was all the family could afford. The
thought of his mother made him feel troubled and he stopped his trek, the
emotion was settled in his chest like ancient mud that had harden. He believed
what he felt could be labeled as despair. After her last stroke, that paralyzed
most of her body and took her ability to communicate, the family had no choice
to place her in the s****y home. His older sister had been diagnosed with manic
depression and was being evaluated for bipolar disorder. She had already shown
signs of neglect toward her children, she was not in the condition to take care
of an elder. Then he worked for 13 hours every day, and only got Sundays off.
On those days, he spent with his mother, holding her hand while wiping the
dribble from her mouth. He was doing all he could, but the harden muck wouldn’t
loosen. Jeff
looked up, the figure had turned away as though it was caught watching. Though,
Jeff wouldn’t blame it. He was sure that he had been standing there staring at
the sidewalk for the last 5 minutes. Jeff began dragging his feet to finish his
slow journey, he could identify the once far silhouette. A simple looking young
man, wearing a large grey hoodie, cargo shorts, and a red skull cap. But Jeff
paid no further attention to his companion. His immediate focuse was on the
grated bench that he set himself in the middle of. An a*****e move, but he didn’t
want the company. The boy kept his back to Jeff while leaning on a pole of the
stop, he looked to be on his phone. Jeff was relieved, this meant the youth had
no interest in social interaction. He sighed and observed his current
surrounding. His stop. Its construction like any other of its kind in a city.
Three walls made with fibro glass held by metal poles with thinning emerald
paint. The roof was arched, colored with a lighter shade of green. He decided
that the roof was a hue of chartreuse. Jeff began studying a random flier that
was taped to the wall to his right. It was fresh and was advertising an
upcoming comedic stand up that would be located at popular restaurant in downtown.
He was trying to recall the last time he had an evening of fun when he heard
shuffling from the young man. Jeff directed his attention to him, the man had
simply turned toward Jeff, showing his full frontal. Jeff immediately study the
face, which had soft features, high cheekbones and a dainty chin. His nose was
crooked and his eyes were almond-shaped. But it was the color that enraptured
Jeff. The grey blue orbs seemed to twinkle as the young man gave a crooked grin,
“It’s a beautiful day, don’t you think?” Asked the man, his
grin transformed to a smile Small talk had been initiated. © 2017 Maple Ellen |
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Added on April 17, 2017 Last Updated on April 24, 2017 AuthorMaple EllenAboutRoses are red Violets are blue I'm more into daisies So here's a f**k you. more..Writing
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