More than one

What if we have more then one soul?

I often feel two souls
Reside in my being

They are neighbors, I imagine,
That have a set picket fence

One displays her edges and shouts truths
The other is soft spoken and reserved

They argue frequently
"Who Will be dominate today?" They shout


Seldom are the days
That have a routine

Though, they will take a moment
To rest on that picket fence

Calling for truce
To give them a day of rest

During those drifted days,
I label as my sabbaths

So, rare, but joyous
Am I, when I feel truly one

Reviews

[Ossicedia]

This is a very powerful poem. It's honestly beautiful there are so many times I've felt like this and you couldn't have described it any better.

[B]

I do believe the soul is pure of all
It is most present at late hours of the night
when no human interference exists
everything else is truly exterior
the human soul is good

made me think a lot about items of spirituality
Nice one !!!

[Maple Ellen]

When I wrote this piece, I was feeling very torn with myself. I realized that there are days when I felt a battle waging inside of me. Then I thought, "What if I have more then one soul?".

[B]

Thats an interesting thought