The Evolution of Love

a dark and passionate love

back

    in the days

when my love flaked

          and fell from my lips

              it was insincere

now

   at your thought

i can drink in

         and my desire for love

            it can be soothed

soon

   at the last hour

when my love dies

           and returns bitterly cold

                  it will be rage

Author's Note

mkay? what do you think?

Reviews

[Pendantry]

I think it's mkay :)
But sad. Must love die?

[Sarah]

Interesting interpretation of the dynamics of love - or, I guess maybe, the thin line between love and hate? I think it is fascinating to delve into the evolution of love into anger. :)

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, it's so sad and beautiful. You did amazingly though (: great job!
100/100