cold

my version of hell

 It was so cold that night

So cold

     Your breath would have turned to mist before your eyes

So cold

     Your tears would have turned to ice before they fell from your cheeks

But I did not cry

For no tears would fall from my eyes again

And there was no mist

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

a very deep piece love the imagery in this alot.... fav lines... Your tears would have turned to ice before they fell from your cheeks

But I did not cry

For no tears would fall from my eyes again... very nice !!!

And there was no mist

[Lunar Lightning]

This is a very good poem. The ending in particular. Great job.

Luna