I Tried My hardest to Say No

I tried my hardest to say no

But I was just too tiered

Why did you do this to me?

I’m too fragile for this

 

I did really try to say no

But you failed to take me seriously

I thought I could trust you

I know now I can’t

 

I’m done saying no to you

But it’s too hard to say goodbye

If you make me cry like that again

I’ll have no chance but to leave

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think...be honest

Reviews

[Lunar Lightning]

This is very good, I do think you could have expanded a little more one it, adding more to speak of your emotions and possibly adding something for imagery, but maybe that isn't what this poem needs. Otherwise I think it is very good and I hope that it isn't what I think it is, and if it is. I really hope it isn't true.

Luna

[RonnieBreight]

i like it. it's raw and true. maybe some stronger words now and then, but then again that might contrast with the tiered, fragile person. so, maybe not. anyways, good write. :).

[lauren emily]

I like this...It definitely leaves you thinking about what you may be saying no to.
Great read and write,

~Lauren

[~eVelyN fAiTh~]

I liked it. It leaves the lingering question of what are you saying no too? It leaves it open for so many different things