Used

Used

A Poem by Amanda Naomi
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i just took random lines from my teachers lecture and created something cool

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Who's going to be responsible?

Everybody knows their roles

It would have been tossed out

If you'd been in doubt about something

There are people that will say

That you are just using them

Really, you are getting nothing out of it

There's a million things you can do

But quality may be sacrificed

© 2008 Amanda Naomi


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Amanda Naomi
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Love it! An original concept that really worked well. This can be interpretted many different ways because, although it doesn't completely make sense, it still does somehow. Great job, very creative. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought this was so interesting! What was the original lecture about?

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Amanda Naomi
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I am from the wildest imagination From a selfless child with nothing to hide Im from a broken family filled with love And too, from a family broken with lack of love I am from the tip of a pen F.. more..

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