Lost in a World of Hate

I'm lost in a world of hate

With no chances to escape

Just crying and crying now

When looking at this world I've found

Tears of pain fall down my face

From what happens in this place

I just want to leave this room

For staying here is my doom

I know i don't belong in here

It is my love that they must fear

Please let me go, just go away

I want to leave this very day

I'm lost in this world

Why can't I escape?

Reviews

[KickyValentine]

i like how this pans out, i have looked at ur work and i will continue as time allows. So far i love ur structure.