Passions course

Passions course

A Poem by Michelle Tarnowski

 

Unclear vision shrouded in mist

Proximity close but undefined

Indistinct images are two yet one

Boundaries crossed

Passion rises

Complete submission

Unification

Exultation

© 2008 Michelle Tarnowski


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An impeccable use of words to describe "Passion!" I am amazed at how so few a words it takes to grasp a reader. You have used each one well. You write tight. As a woman of many words, I need to take a lesson from your expertise. Well done, Michelle!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Better get a new pair of specs, or the passionate unification might be with a rather exhultant postman.
:-)
David.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well stated. Feels exactly like that. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 11, 2008

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Michelle Tarnowski
Michelle Tarnowski

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I started writing when I took journalism and wrote for the college newspaper for a year. I loved it so much that the last quarter I took it without credit. My need to write comes and goes. When it is .. more..

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