Peace on the river

Peace on the river

A Story by Michelle Tarnowski
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4th of July at home used to mean get ready to call 911....

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   Living along the river you can see a first rate fireworks show and never have to leave your porch. As far as you can hear and see the air is filled with soft explosions from across the river echoing through the hills while bursts color light the night sky revealing the silhouettes of ancient trees that seem to catch the glittering jewels in their branches. No crowds, no traffic, no noise, and no one doing stupid and dangerous things like holding an m80 a little too long and blowing off their hand.  All of the neighbors have gone off to celebrate taking their food, boats, kids, dogs, assorted thundering kabooms and sparkling aerials with them.

   At one time I was married to self proclaimed pyro tech who believed the bigger and louder the better. The 4th was never dull as he and our boys blew up numerous watermelons, cans, and a life size Barbie that was never quite the same again (Lets not forget the creative use of tennis balls, duct tape, filled with m whatever’s).

   When our daughter was born I thought I would at last have an ally in my protest to the 4th of July madness that seemed to over take the minds of the males in our family. All golden curls, ruffles, and pinafores this delicate pink cheeked creature turned out to be the biggest pyro in the bunch! I should have known by the fixated gleam in her eyes as the first sparkler was held in that chubby little hand that I may as well give up and have the hose, bandages, burn medicine, and the phone with 911 on stand by and ready to go. Everyone has grown up and moved out on their own (including the husband) and sorry to say I really don’t miss the smell of burnt hair, flesh, or Barbie plastic.

 

 

 

© 2008 Michelle Tarnowski


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Michelle, this is superb. I LOVE IT! I had to laugh about your daughter turning out to be a "Pyro" as well. LOL
You are astounding me lady. I especially love your ending. It wrapped your story up and you went out with a bang: Everyone has grown up and moved out on their own (including the husband) and sorry to say I really don't miss the smell of burnt hair, flesh, or Barbie plastic.

Can't say as I would miss the burnt hair, flesh or plastic either!!! I can smell them now...Ugh!

Great job! So glad you are here!!!



Posted 16 Years Ago


This is hilarious. I enjoyed the subtle humor of the piece, very much. This could have been written by Mark Twain it was so craftily done. My compliments to the author.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very sweet and endearing.... it took me right to that place.... I felt as though it were me on that river.... well done !!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I started writing when I took journalism and wrote for the college newspaper for a year. I loved it so much that the last quarter I took it without credit. My need to write comes and goes. When it is .. more..

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