Illusion

Years of running, eyes closed

Far as one can go in the opposite direction

From loves pain, loves lies, loves deception

An illusion from a master craftsman

Of singled minded trust

Only to be torn in loves storm

Shredded soul, broken heart

Cries out….to no one

In the silent dark.

Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow.....wow. This is an amazing poem and so full of emotion. Wonderful job!!!

Heather

[Lily1111]

The closing lines "Cries out�.to no one In the silent dark." lingers with sadness and lonliness. Lots of emotion woven throughout this poem.

[Namuh Niffa]

pretty cool.

deception is nasty. ugghhh

dog poem

[WordMaster]

A short and compelling poem about a subject we all know to well

Your word selection help to bring the poems message to the reader clearly and
with feeling

Well Done!

[Michael]

This one has the ring of truth to it and I am sure most every reader will relate to it with personal experience. It is hard to write about common themes without sounding trite or simple, you have done that here. I do like the reduction in line length it has. almost makes a saw-tooth pattern.