Barter

Living in a world would be better if we could barter our feelings and help someone out.

Let's barter some things today,
Let the things be replaced by feelings, emotions maybe life,
I am not afraid, not worried,
For a "man helps man" has given me a destined courage,
I allow you to overflow my intactness,
I invite you to barter your life with mine.
Let all my smiles puffing in my cheeks,
and all the glitters i earned by awestruck amazements
be your definition.

and
your tired, dark-circled dream-carriers,
your subdued mind in the bones and skin container
be my new designation.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful thoughts, written into beautiful words and turned into a beautiful idea. (Did I just use the word beautiful three times in one sentence? And why am I typing out what I'm thinking and putting it in brackets, like that explains everything? And why is the bit in brackets that you're thinking longer than the actual review you wrote? Stop typing, now...Aargh.) :-)

[jb]

I like the courage in this....great job!

[HappyFeeler]

Thanks a lot Jessica for your words :)

[jb]

Your welcome :)

[Peach]

It's an entertaining and fun message. The positivism is energizing!
May you feel happy, HappyFeeler

MomoBeans

[HappyFeeler]

Thanks a lot. It feels great to hear MomoBeans.

[JC]

extremely intriguing, with beautiful depth and full of ponderings and further questions, I sense your free heart and your burning and yearning to express and to fill your life with others that burn too.

[HappyFeeler]

Thanks a lot. your words not only help but encourage :)