They Didn't Care

This is a small picture of what my life was like before I was put in to foster care.

My Parents didn't care that I was four

They'd leave me all by myself

I cry and cry as they shut the door

My Parents didn't care that I was five

They'd laugh at me when asked for help 

They didn't try to keep me a live

Through all these trouble and many more

Is what made the man some adore

As I grow They should see

What I have become to be

Reviews

[Nix Is Still Typing...]

This is good! Just a small criticism...
"They didn't wanna keep me a live"
should be
"They didn't wanna keep me alive" ("Alive" is one word)
But other than that, I think that the rhyme is good and the poem...it sends a message! :) Thanks for writing and thanks for sharing!

Kindly, Nix ❤️

[Mantequilla]

Thanks for the positive feed back.

[Nix Is Still Typing...]

You're very welcome!!!

[littlekinglord]

I think you did a god job with the rhymes. Switch the title to they didn't care it makes more sense.

[Mantequilla]

This is my first poem. So I could use some tips.