As The Silence Breaks

" The power of silence is enormous"

As the Silence Breaks

 

As the silence breaks winds will go fiery and dark

No more reasoning for life with death would spark

Tainted vision of eyes will fall apart and turn into ashes

Lightening of reconstruction will appear in constant flashes

 

The change will become newborn with beads of future

With a promise to sulking bodies changed attire of fresh couture

Voices will cut trends to even out the mild taste in it

Quietly ushering with revolt entangled with it

 

Let the banners go off colors to adorn only the white

Peace will mark all frontiers embossing the known sign

When silence will break with a unanimous sound

Corners of the earth will curve to create a perfect round

 

When silence breaks a hope is born to remain around

Shrieking hearts would melt the purpose of stony grounds

The seed of unity would blossom highest of its might

Morning light will spread to clear away scattered patches of this night

 

 

********By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

© copyright Wed Dec 14 07:00:16 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

Author's Note

An attempt to describe the power of silence and the magic when it breaks.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"As the silence breaks winds will go fiery and dark

No more reasoning for life with death would spark

Tainted vision of eyes will fall apart and turn into ashes

Lightening of reconstruction will appear in constant flashes"~Excellent write!...a wonderful message of hope amongst the "tainted vision".

[Manpreet]

Dear Robbie, thank you so much for all the encouraging and extremely motivating comments. I truly appreciate it. Have great week end!!!

[paparapapa]

Breathtaking. And yes, you wonderfully described the magical effect silence has. I specially loved this lines...
"When silence will break with a unanimous sound
Corners of the earth will curve to create a perfect round"
They pretty much sum up the idea that a moment of silence can almost immediately bring peace. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem. :)

[Me]

Such wonderful thoughts . Great job

[Arielle Ann]

strong write we have here!

[BlueDreams]

An impressive and a Great write :-)