As The Silence Breaks

" The power of silence is enormous"

As the Silence Breaks

 

As the silence breaks winds will go fiery and dark

No more reasoning for life with death would spark

Tainted vision of eyes will fall apart and turn into ashes

Lightening of reconstruction will appear in constant flashes

 

The change will become newborn with beads of future

With a promise to sulking bodies changed attire of fresh couture

Voices will cut trends to even out the mild taste in it

Quietly ushering with revolt entangled with it

 

Let the banners go off colors to adorn only the white

Peace will mark all frontiers embossing the known sign

When silence will break with a unanimous sound

Corners of the earth will curve to create a perfect round

 

When silence breaks a hope is born to remain around

Shrieking hearts would melt the purpose of stony grounds

The seed of unity would blossom highest of its might

Morning light will spread to clear away scattered patches of this night

 

 

********By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

© copyright Wed Dec 14 07:00:16 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

Author's Note

An attempt to describe the power of silence and the magic when it breaks.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"As the silence breaks winds will go fiery and dark

No more reasoning for life with death would spark

Tainted vision of eyes will fall apart and turn into ashes

Lightening of reconstruction will appear in constant flashes"~Excellent write!...a wonderful message of hope amongst the "tainted vision".

[Manpreet]

Dear Robbie, thank you so much for all the encouraging and extremely motivating comments. I truly appreciate it. Have great week end!!!

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Its effective! I liked the imagery potrayed here!! Mesmerising!

[Manpreet]

Thank you for your review it is extremely valuable to me. regards, Manpreet

[Balkaran Sidhu]

very nice manpreet....i liked the way u finished the poem....on a high..the flow of the poem was very nice too

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

nice poem....serene and touching..)

[Jack Isaac]

I often think of silence as a calm before the storm, or a sense of being in the eye of a huricane knowing that destruction is all around just waiting for its path to come my way. Because I think of silence in that way, I couldn't never describe the breaking of it so eloquently as you have. "To blossom highest of its might" --Wow great concepts in high word efficiency! Very well said here!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Eureka! It was a successful attempt.

[Sakib]

A fascinating write. I would love to read it again and again. I liked your thoughts too. Great write.

[Yoshiyuki]

Nice piece. It was beautiful!

[SUGATA M]

You proved silence to be so beautiful