Touched by a dream

"What we lived was history what we wish to live is a dream a dream that dares us all"

 

Touched by a Dream

 

Beneath the cloudy rim of clear, blue stream

Watching trails of raindrops slipping off morning leaves

As life moved through time’s patches with missing seam

It was then when I was touched by a dream

 

Winds breaking into vicinity with magical warmth

 Lost over the crisp daze like a forgotten swarm

Knitting hives of promises with a heavenly glow

Swept in whirlwind a pace that could never get slow

 

Touched by a dream hope was born again

From the curves of mind to the heart unchained

Unveiling million stars for the span of open eyes

Unwinding palms to set free all captured butterflies

 

Sprinkling new colors on fresh canvas of thoughts

Filling out meaningful content to all empty spots

Breathing will carve slowly a mist of unique existence

Voice will join diverse notes in one single resonance

 

The touch of dream unwrapped rainbow blooming in its prime

And the clear links of joined aspiration with moments of time

Shining between the truth and the dream one single silver line

That will lead from the thirst to the reservoir of life’s sweetest wine

 

 

......... By Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

 

© copyright Wed Dec 14 06:56:10 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

very nice here again manpreet....i always wanted to write something like this...couldn't find the words...u did great

[Manpreet]

Dear Balkaran, thanks for your comments, i truly appreciate it.

[JRB]

i too fine the thought lines nicely stated,,,Shining between the truth and the dream one single silver line , That will lead from the thirst to the reservoir of life’s sweetest wine
keep up the writes

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Amazing write! This a refreshing read... so uplifting and whimsical. My favorite~ "Shining between the truth and the dream one single silver line, That will lead from the thirst to the reservoir of life's sweetest wine"~ Like Fine wine, so is this Poem. :)

[paparapapa]

Wow, the metaphors were just beautiful, and I loved how the poem exuded magic with its every word. You captivated me from start to finish. Really great write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Renny]

I swear I read all the lines twice cos I so much love them. This is a rare beautiful piece!

[Arielle Ann]

one more great piece...the sync, the rhythm, and still capturing the gist, the thoughts-all woven in a fine thread!

[BlueDreams]

Very greatly imagined the theme ... Awesome piece...

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

ua poetry reflects ur aura..... and its unique!

[Me]

Wow! Such exquisite imagery in bringing to life the scene