Walk through the fog

A walk through past is like walking through the fog where everything have its presence but yet invisible

Walk through the fog


In a big city one cold winter day
Through the silent lanes I was walking away
Where will I reach? I possibly couldn’t say
On that endless dark and foggy way

Milky sheet of fog was spread around
Silence was embedded in those subtle sounds
I hoped and wished with thoughts profound
I froze in time and stood astound

Thousands of shadows simply passed by
Surrounded by strange voices talking on sly
The feel was lonely sad and painful
Even softest of thoughts felt so sinful

Soft embraces of past beckoned me
Locked memoirs started breaking free
Scent of warm breath hampered my pace
Chills woke me to move into empty space

Just couldn’t stop that falling tear
I couldn’t get far but I was nowhere near
Smile was stale with a long lost charm
Intuitive mirage was the only stance

Held out my hand to the hope unknown
Waited until the sign was shown
Drifted along with that magical sway
In a big city one cold winter day
On an endless dark and foggy way

by Manpreet Kaur Matharoo

© copyright Wed Dec 14 06:52:06 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved

Reviews

[Me]

Terse and good write.

[LunarSong]

I love this!!!

[Loki Ragna-rock]

beautifully captured sense of isolation in the midst of urban population.

[BlueDreams]

Its an unstoppable masterpiece.. loved it alot.. No words honestly.. :-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved the journey through the mind as you took me on this walk with you. The heartbreak was felt in the imagery that you have conveyed to the reader. I truly connected with this piece. Nice write!

[SUGATA M]

Awesome....................marvellous write up

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

an Indian Wordsworth in the making........ *mark my words*

[Arielle Ann]

wonderful yet again...you create awesome pictures of nature always!