Vacant Eyes

Written June 2007, pre- deletion date.

Oh Vacant Eyes

 

Oh vacant eyes, please don’t cry,

Vacant vacant eyes.

 

Reviews

[Shadkim]

No hope felt to the owner those eyes - that's what I got. But the voice that pleads for the crying to end might help this person and take care of them during the hard times. Very cool little piece. ^^

[Thea M. Joy]

This is absolutely beautiful! I love reading stuff I can relate to! :)

[Susan M. Fenn]

You did an excellent job of describing that point where there is nothing left, yet the tears keep falling. This made me sad and made me want to hug the girl with vacant eyes.
*hugs tight* I'm here, not often as of late, but I am here.
xoxo
S

[Crystal L. Test]

There is an opposition between vacant (for me meaning absent of feeling) and crying (which obviously is a strong emotion). There is much said here in very little words.

Great job and thanks for sharing.

[Crazy Cat Man]

yes no mas.....no llores mas :(

[Brianna Brie]

Oh vacant eyes, please don�t cry,
Vacant vacant eyes.

Window to the soul...this reminds me of the times that I would bite back tears. Such a few short words spoken with such meaning!

[Gandré]

Interesting. You know how to perceive it. I feel pain while reading it and would like to hug someone.