The devil wears girl's jeans

Written June 2007 (I think), pre deletion day.

The devil wears girl’s jeans

He tortures my soul
Strangles
Life torn to pieces
Beaten

His monstrous words
Poison
I breathe them in
I choke

His evil has no bounds
Immoral
He hurts, he keeps on hurting
ABUSER!

He rises from the bowels
Abomination
A menace in human form,
Freak.

He feeds on souls
Oppressor
He has no conscience
Damned

He has no love, only
Arrogance
Spite
Vanity
And hate.

Piss off Peter Pan.

Reviews

[Bubo]

The last line sums it up!!Piss off Peter Pan..............bought magic that became destructive..........very vivid!
Love the title.........a very ranty piece!!!Love it!

[Crazy Cat Man]

damn he wear's girl jeans.... dude definately has problems.

[Susan M. Fenn]

Oooo!!! I really do like this one. The venom, the hate, its all right there, top surface and all. And yes, this time, Peter Pan can piss off. He isn't worthy of your time, your thoughts, your feelings. He just isn't. *hugs you so tight* How's you honey? I haven't been on in ages, sorry it took me so long to review.
xoxoxo
S

[Brian K. Walters]

Your work always captures the reader with pure emotion and intrigue. This write is no different in that way.
My hope for you is that of peace to wash over your abused heart.

Keep writing my friend :)

Brian