Blame?

Written May 2007, pre deletion day.

Blame?

 

Each time you abuse me, I do the same,

I give you this power, why?

Please let me be, let me be.

 

You tell drag me down, I help you,

My heart is open, why?

Please go away, go away.

 

When you speak to hurt, I listen,

I give you a target, why?

Please no more, no more.

 

You move towards me, I step closer,

I pave your way, why?

Please not again, not again.

 

Your eyes are dead, I see them,

I am blind to your evil, why?

Please burn in hell ……. stay in hell.

 

 

Reviews

[Zane Mathias]

amazing write. and the answer is because we cant always hold back our emotions. i am here if you need to talk.

[Shane Patrick]

I was holding my hands up, disturbing to be sure but raw and beautifully writen..

[Crystal L. Test]

This piece was disturbing in a good way. It makes me self-reflect. When I've "paved the way" for someone to take advantage or hurt me. You may have been blind to this person's way, in the past, but it sounds like you are very aware of them now. Take your words and empower yourself.

Great job and thanks for sharing.

[Brianna Brie]

You move towards me, I step closer,
I pave your way, why?
Please not again, not again.

Interesting!! This is like looking into a mirror. One hell of a write.