Arsehole

Written May 2007, pre deletion date.

Arsehole

 

Poxy putrid pile of puss,

I think of him and start to cuss.

B*****d, wanker, f*****g twat,

Evil s**t head, useless prat.

 

Fade to black.

 

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

I cannot comment on this poem as it is 1.Nothing to do with me but yes i feel for you and it is just you ranting go girl go get him
2.There are just so many swear words it really just goes over my head sorry for that.

[Gandré]

indeed, it was a way how to release the tension, a great rant ! loved it. hope you are well. thx so much for your last review. I guess, I've forgotten to say it. be well. and lots of luck in this contest, I am voting for you.

[Nick Erickson]

Give me a moment to stop laughing... dam... that was funny, quick and to the point. Great writing, great release.

[Brianna Brie]

Poxy putrid pile of puss,
I think of him and start to cuss.
B*****d, wanker, f*****g twat,
Evil s**t head, useless prat.

Laughing my a*s off!! Thanks for a great release of anger. That is exactly what I was feeling all night.

[Susan M. Fenn]

oooo.. I love it, I love it, I love it.. can I send it to the sperm donor!!!???

[Sadie Quartz]

it's terets via poetry

[Brian K. Walters]

So, tell us what your really think of him lol

Ouch! The anger, hurt and pain portrayed in this just smacks the reader and demands attention!

Sometimes the difference between love and hate becomes so minimal, it's actually transparent. I hope you find relief from your pain soon :(

Brian