Evil has a name

Written April 2007, pre-deletion day. I love this one.

Evil has a name.

 

I want to stamp upon his bollocks,

No, that’s not correct.

I want to stamp upon his bollocks,

Then break his penis while erect.

God bless me with a razor,

Let me shave his balding head.

Give to me an MP3,

Of all the awful things he said.

He is nothing but a bully,

Every night we all must pray….

Chastise him, cauterise him,

Place his arrogance on display.

 

 

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Rant rant rant i've got ants in my pants
save me from this evil fiend
and with it let him be hell bound
oh no not more crude words
ringing in my ears how unprofound.

[Ian]

Well..... That would be really painful... Hehe...
You must really hate that guy...
Very original writing!
Good job!

[Nick Erickson]

I'm a little scared to leave a review... but I liked it, how you got everything off your chest. It's good to vent and you did it well. I really liked the line, "Place his arrogance on display."

[Raef C. Boylan]

Nice flow and crafting of the rhyme.
The humour in this piece prevents it from being too bitter, instead just a fun poem.
"Bollocks" is repeated twice at the start, which wrecks the structure a little. 'Buttocks' also rhymes with bollocks; it's not as strong, but at least it saves the beginning from repetition...just a suggestion.

Thanks for posting this.

[Susan M. Fenn]

Sounds to me like you are well on your way to doing just that.. *hands you a razorblade* Have at it girl! I will hold him down! Excellent flow, the words play nicely off of one another. And how I can relate. Very much so, very easily relate.

[Crazy Cat Man]

whewwwwwww and what is Evil's name? Man...........this guy is a jerk. What a great vent.

[Brian K. Walters]

Ouch! I would hate to be him!

What I am actually amazed at is you easily applied artistry to the emotion of anger. Your wording here is perfect as if it were painfully and articulately thought out word by word, yet the flow of this poem is as well. In fact the flow is so well done it's as if you were just speaking this off the top of your head.
Such a combination is rare and a true sign of brilliance!

Very well done!

Brian