The Gun

The Gun

A Poem by Just Manoosh
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Written after and in tribute to the school shootings April 2007.

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The Gun

 

A hurricane of bullets,

A pocket full of tears,

A bloody thirsty object igniting primal fears.

 

The strongest of all evil,

The blackest darkest force,

The collateral of hate, destroy its very source.

© 2008 Just Manoosh


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WOW.................i am speachless. you have not only knocked down the witers block you stabbed and beat it. the flow and wording so perfect. this is not the first one i am adding to my fav's. Great Job M you are really envigorating my want to read to day.

Posted 16 Years Ago


:( thank you for writing this........so much is said in so little words......that's very hard to do and you did it. :( And Im from DC....so this was close.....thank u for this

Posted 17 Years Ago


Very strong. You obviously have alot of passion about this.

Blue

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2008

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Just Manoosh
Just Manoosh

Wonderland, South East England., United Kingdom



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