Daedalus

A short piece combining past and present.

Daedalus

 

An architect troubled of skies,

Punisher of damning lies.

A master mind of crafted skit,

Engulfing words and lyrical wit.

 

The Labyrinth is yours to build,

Protective walls where hearts are sealed.

The beginning or end is hard to find,

Release and free your troubled mind.

 

 

Reviews

[Jonathan Ballam]

I enjoyed this poem. The first image stuck with me the most "architect of troubled skies".
The sense of ambivalence in this poem I found really worked well. I would suggest to try and take out some of the rhyme because I think that it's restricting some of the images. Otherwise, great piece of writing!

[Just Manoosh]

The infamous Daedalus needs to explaination, I guess it is the reference, mixture, notion to the secondary person is that which means more. Mx

[Twilight]

As the previous reviewer has noticed, this poem raises questions, whilst not providing answers. It is also a rather surreal, and thoughtfully written piece. Thankyou, for sharing this with us!