The Indigo Sky

Somewhere in the blacknest night there is a patch of lightened sky, it is so dark that most can not see the beauty that is there. I see it, I see it but can never reach for it ....... again.

 

The Indigo Sky

 

 

Withered leaves tease the day light hours.

 

The air they do not want.

 

The water they decline.

 

The valley of the bluebells a distant memory.

 

A hated place, a loved place, a chosen place.

 

Lost.

 

But not forgotten.

 

The dream of a distant rainbow, a daydream shadow.

 

A glance of a once heart.

 

Lost.

 

But not forgotten.

Reviews

[Zane Mathias]

umm hmmm Loves it i do.lol i know you are probly getting tired of me saying this but you constantly grow with each peice- YOu should have your own book!!!!! B.P.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This makes me feel sad .. how beautiful you expressed the feelings we all have had..
I love the ending,, lost .. but not forgotten.. beautiful poem.
Chloe

[Snuggles McClintock]

interesting choice to include a B & S photo with this piece. I wonder why

[Milton Donald]

i find this to be both beautiful and deeply tragic. excellent write! sincerely--MD

[These Haunted Hallways]

In this life, we search for the best and we hope to be the best. The light we want to reach may be far away, but if we at least attempt to find it, im sure that light will definitely shine upon us in any type of weather, because we believed in its spirit, and its spirit believed in us. Great job here :)

B.A.

[Dionysus Cain]

interesting write, i get it. i have to say that in some parts it moves faster than the flow. it kinda of throws you off a little, bu you bring it back and it ends well. nice write