The Fight

Written November 07, pre deletion day.

The Fight

 

Happiness escapes me,

I fight, I yearn, I step back …. Where are you?

A moment out of reach.

 

 

Author's Note

No quiet a Senryu Haiku but the words seem to fit.

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

man buy a gun and blow this guy away.

[Celtic Cat]

Ouch. Oh I feel this way too closely to my own heart. I'm rooting for you, Mx..... I think you know we all are around here!!
Much love~ excellent write!

[Just Manoosh]

My honey H.A.M, perhaps its not that I give up, but actually the same old adage of .... sometimes you have to take a step back and let things happen, rather than pushing it. You know, trying to hard and all that. Hugs. Mx

[H. A. M.]

Oh oh! She's shadow boxing! LOL! I just had that picture of you getting ready for the next go round.
This is cool! I like that you still yearn for that and just giving up. You'll fight for what you really want that's for sure.
Keep going and keep writing!

[Zane Mathias]

you are right the words do fit and very will. it seems in lift that- that moment that we yearn for is always that arm reach. but that is why we are able to jump. you will find that when in that moment that you have yearn for so much that we lose track and the next thing we know it moving away faster thatn you can reach over and grab it but if you jump at it you will catch it before you lose it for ever. keep up the good fight just kmake sure you fight the right people. Bring it "M" lol