You

Written pre-deletion day, October 2008, my sign off said it all . "© 2007 Manoosh Crook is F@CKING FURIOUS today"

YOU

 

You have penis envy, of a woman?

How sad.

You have nothing in your life, but spite?

How sad.

You have no heart, no life, no hope?

How sad.

 

How do you live with yourself?

 

You have no friend, bar hate?

How deserved.

You have no hope, bar death?

How lovely,

You have no future, bar loneliness?

How nice.

 

How did you get to this place?

 

You have no respect, but your own?

How admirable.

You have no love, but your own?

How commendable.

You have no-one, but yourself?

How wonderful.

 

You must be so proud.

 

How sad.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

hahaa i like this. This made me think of a loser ex-friend who has a gift of making people like him at first then making everyone hate him...he's so pathetic..thanks for the laugh.

[RAWR!]

after reading this i am happy i am not the person you are writing about.

[Shane Patrick]

that passion is still there my friend.. I find it hard to ignore your writing its always from the heart.. well done..

[Ivory]

Very interesting piece. Love the brutal honesty of it.
Good write : )

[Nick Erickson]

You know, I liked this piece. How shallow can some be? Very.

[Jaclyn]

Oooh, hooooo! YOU go girl! Whew! I'm liking the rage. I couldn't have written this any better if I tried. This has a smug satisfaction to it that this person is suffering, it has pity that someone could be so ignorant and ridiculous, and I like that at the end you say "how sad" and just those two words say both "Hah, hah! Not sad at all" in a sarcastic singsong, but at the same time, they're like that head-shaking back and forth that one does when they think, "What a moron, such a shame". I don't know how to word that exactly how I mean it, but I"m sure you get it. Excellent excellent excellent work! :)

[Zane Mathias]

Great poem but at the end i think you should add how sad. this is you i hear your voice.
You have no respect, but your own?

How admirable.

You have no love, but your own?

How commendable.

You have no-one, but yourself?

How sad.



You must be so proud
How sad

[Rebecca]

Yeah - tear him a new a*****e. Oh I love it. I feel your anger today - I'm itching to write now.

As for an actual review the bolding is effective. As is the alternation between the questions and the answers all beginning with "how" shows a focus to your anger.

[Coromandel]

sheesh, I guess you said you weren't joking about your anger, who are you talking to, guess it's none of my business