Shut the door behind you

Written October 07, pre-deletion day.

 

Shut the door behind you

 

I have a demon,

Once he lived in my heart,

Then for a on to my shoulder,

Now he hides in my shoe.

 

When I stand up I shall squash him,

Then he will be my demon no more.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dorothy]

I like this one a lot! Its simpe and yet a lot of fun. Oh and I love the shoes! They are too cute. :)

[Tania Leigh]

I love this! Short and simple, but put a big smile on my face and got a laugh out of me.

Great write!

[Middagslapie]

ooooohhhh! I love your 'moments'!

Keep it up!
ps: no offence, but u should get mad more often if poetry like this springs forth from your rage.

Brilliant piece!

[Shane Patrick]

nice shoe and poem.. :)

[Bubo]

Yes!!!!!
STAND UP NOW.......and squash the toad, for he was not a prince and did not deserve a princess like you!
A strong write!

[Coromandel]

wooohh I really love this one, Short direct and great intent too