The Wind

The Wind

A Poem by Just Manoosh
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Written July 2007, pre deletion day.

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The Wind

 

A deep breath…. perspiration coats her body,

A gentle breeze…. caresses her imperfections,

A beating drum…. drowns her resistance,

A dominant force…. her body it yields.

 

How exquisite his virtual touch,

How powerful the storm ahead.

 

© 2008 Just Manoosh


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Short, sweet and to the point. I love it!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think you wrote this one...my face is still beet red!!!

...and it is an exquisite piece as are you!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

strong is this wind, and strong is the woman who stands in it. wonderful work.. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Just Manoosh
Just Manoosh

Wonderland, South East England., United Kingdom



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