Why? How?

Why? How?

A Poem by Just Manoosh
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Written July 2007, pre deletion day.

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Why? How?

I wanted to ask why?
But there would be no answer.
I wanted to ask how? 
But your lies bare no truth.

...................... F**k you, I will answer my own questions.

Why? because you are in bed with the Devil.
How? because your soul is black.

No arguements, shut up, "I" am talking.

Why should I give you absolution, I dare you demon, ask me.

NEVER will you be happy, why?
Because you are weak.
NEVER will you find another, why?
Because I promise you will burn in hell.

....................... Fear me demon, you have much reason.

Why? because I will not let you hurt another.
How? now that would be telling .... drop dead.



© 2008 Just Manoosh


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Pissed and taking control are we?
"Why? because you are in bed with the Devil.
How? because your soul is black. " Damn Manoosh. It sounds like you just got tired of somebodys bull and started puting the smack down on em'.
"NEVER will you be happy, why?
Because you are weak.
NEVER will you find another, why?
Because I promise you will burn in hell. " I get two views of this in my head when I read this.
One is a betrayal by a friend and they just ran out of excuses and your good graces.
The other is japanese animie. I've been wathing something on cartoon network that is reminisant of this. Please don't take that like I'm knocking what you wrote. Far from it.
"Why? because I will not let you hurt another.
How? now that would be telling .... drop dead." This could be a nice ending point because when you say drop dead there I'm taking as that's the end of him. He's done for sure.
The last line seems to be aimed at the audience. If so then I have no more to say on it. If not then it's not really needed unless you put it somewhere before the last stanza.
I like the take charge effect you put in this and throw the accusations at the demon. Nice way to cast him out dear. Nice.




Posted 17 Years Ago


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