Why? How?

Written July 2007, pre deletion day.

Why? How?

I wanted to ask why?
But there would be no answer.
I wanted to ask how? 
But your lies bare no truth.

...................... F**k you, I will answer my own questions.

Why? because you are in bed with the Devil.
How? because your soul is black.

No arguements, shut up, "I" am talking.

Why should I give you absolution, I dare you demon, ask me.

NEVER will you be happy, why?
Because you are weak.
NEVER will you find another, why?
Because I promise you will burn in hell.

....................... Fear me demon, you have much reason.

Why? because I will not let you hurt another.
How? now that would be telling .... drop dead.

Reviews

[R J Askew]

This is the best of the three I've read. I was drawn in by the questions in the headline and the anger in the description...and was not disappointed. it's a stabbing sort of poem and i imagine if you can deliver it with the intent with which it was written it would make the audience sit back. I like the way the why/how are threded through the poem. strong meat.

[Crystal L. Test]

Very powerful and angry. But it's good to take control over someone/something that has controlled you. Very real and honest. This reminded me of some of the works that Susan M. Fenn has posted. Have you ever read her work?

Thanks for sharing.

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'did u get out of bed the wrong side the day you wrote this?... I also see your a batman fan?

p.s is your name really maniish.. because thats the coolest name ever!!!!

[Shane Patrick]

No arguements, shut up, "I" am talking. stern... and they way we answer our own questions... is sometimes the best truths...

[Brianna Brie]

OOOh, Spitting mad, firey poem.......Well done, my dear!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very powerful - excellently written with such strength - Well done indeed. I am inspired to send this to someone I know who deserves these exact words. Thank you much for sharing.
Love and Light,
Siddartha

[Noel]

I love the feeling that comes across in this piece... I've loved it every time I've felt it myself. It's that "f**k you a*****e..." attitude... it's the attitude and emotion that enables us to move our life to a better place!

Thanks for sharing it with me. Great write. Kudos!

[Geoffrey]

Mmmmm, such delicious FEROCITY. I like that sort of thing, so kudos.

[Bubo]

NEVER will you be happy, why?
Because you are weak.
NEVER will you find another, why?
Because I promise you will burn in hell.

....................... Fear me demon, you have much reason.

Why? because I will not let you hurt another.
How? now that would be telling .... drop dead.

REAL ANGER!!!!
Wow!!A very bittersweet piece, with such rage...........
someone has deeply hurt you, but you are not going to
lie down about it.........loved the way you answered the questions,
i could almost see his mouth hanging open!

[Darryl Salach]

I hear you friend....LOUD AND CLEAR!!! Well done Manoosh!!