Two Shooshes

How do you kiss a rainbow? Written July 2007 pre deletion day.

 

Two Shooshes

 

some

days

are

scary,

 

open

eyes

closed

heart.

 

some

days

just

blur,

 

past

present

future

fear.

 

some

days

hurt

more,

 

blank

book

closed

room.

 

some

days

hold

tears,

 

she

smiles

no

more

Reviews

[Susan M. Fenn]

But, but Manoosh... *smiles at your own face* I know there is a smile, somewhere deep down inside. It just needs to be set free.. and you'll then see.. how much you mean to me.

[Zane Mathias]

i like this one. it reminds me of one of mine i did(convicted). i agree with crystal. it is very easy to relate to. keep up the good writes

[Crystal L. Test]

this pretty much summed up each day of my week! LOL Very fresh and unique perspective. Very easy to relate to.

Great job and thanks for sharing.

[Darryl Salach]

we can all relate to this one and nod, yep, uh huh, that's me!!

[H. A. M.]

It's nice with a good even rythm to it. I admit I don't make the conection with this part as with the rest.
"some
days
hurt
more,

blank
book
closed
room. " Could be just me. It makes me think though.

[Crazy Cat Man]

:)

[Shadkim]

Wow, very nice! I've never thought of that before, although sliding down a rainbow would be fun if at all possible! As always, your poems make me think. Good job!

[Gandré]

To kiss a rainbow - what an idea. Yes, to kiss it with eyes! Loved your rhyming here and romantic approach. xx lara.