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A Poem by Just Manoosh
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Written July 07, pre deletion date.

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Wanted:

A new job,

A new car,

A new TV,

…. More room for your greed.

 

I prefer friendship.

 

Wanted:

More money,

More status,

More power,

…. Fill your empty life.

 

I prefer hope.

 

Wanted:

Brown hair,

Smaller hips,

Bigger b***s,

…. Obsessed with vanity.

 

I prefer happiness …… tell me, don’t you?

 

 

© 2008 Just Manoosh


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this is all to true in this modern world. vanity. very well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Yeah...i will go with your "preferences" every time. Fleeting or long lasting? Simple choice really. Nicely written. Julian

Posted 17 Years Ago


Wanted:
Brown hair,
Smaller hips,
Bigger b***s,
�. Obsessed with vanity.

I prefer happiness �� tell me, don�t you?


haha great. Happiness is always better...there are people in this world who have these things yet they are not happy with what they got. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


Yes..........we are a superfical lot!
But of course happeness, hope and friendship give
so much more!
Good point!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dig deeper

Posted 17 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Just Manoosh
Just Manoosh

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