Dreamed

 

you make me feel like no other can

i dream nightly of just holding your hand

this misery is becoming deadly to me

these kinds of thoughts have never haunted me

this oxygen is getting hard to breath in

the only way i know i can survive

is to keep you in my dreams tonight

because there it seems i've yet to realize

that you're gone and i live off of old lies

i know that without you i wont be the same

even tho i constantly deny the change

i pass up good things and im starting to cling to

every memory of me and you

you talked to me tonight

i didnt say a thing

i got to hear your voice

i melted

fhe first time in months

you sounded a little different

but i could tell it was you

i wish i coulda talked back

i really wanna call back

but i feel so low

blocked my number from your phone

but thats the least of my problems

i cant get you outa my head

waking up is something i dred

i never thought i'd end up like this

one thing i miss most is your kiss

you are more amazing and out of reach than i ever dreamed

but now you're probably somewhere making out with that b***h

my 11:11 wish is always used on you

even tho i know it'll probably never come true

i still have hope and i still pray

that you will one day

take me back

i've never wanted anything more than this

more than you

please tell me what i should do

cause my mind reading skills arnt as sharp as they used to be

and i need you.

 

Author's Note

This is more of a song.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

You make me feel so strange,I dream night after night of just holding your hands
Misery is being deadly company to me,those thoughts never haunted me as before
Every breath I take reminds me i could only live with you in my dreams
For you are gone and i realize I am living my bad dreams and old lies
I know without you its never the same,I lived on memories of me and you
You just talked and i never said a thing,could never get you off my head
Never thought it to end like this,one thing I miss most is your kiss
such lovely write,lovely thoughts and tender feelings..just great
lovely write

[Muhammad]

This is one of the few times I read something and it made me feel the author's pain. This is so beautiful, and I can totally relate to this. Keep doing what you do.

[Eliza Pleasant]

This is beautiful. I simply love this poem. I can't wait to read more of your work.