Remember Her

Just another Poem

(TITLE) Remember her

My life still stands

and friends still there

I feel like my hands

create personal pain that isn't fair

my friends are no fans

of anything that I dare

and anything I say with demands

yet I'm willing to share

I feel like my feelings reprimand

everything for which I care

my feelings aren't manned

they've gone somewhere

none of it makes sense

so my pain has no end

it is so emmense

that there is no way I can tend

my feelings for her are dense

yet my fear, I cannot fend

and my pains I can't rinse

but love, I can send

I will try much harder

for, love is real

I will go farther

then my original deal

I will get her

I will try for sure

I wish I could say, Hi

but I just can't 

and this makes me wanna die

when I say that, she gives me a ran

she just isn't shy

and her feelings don't slant

I don't know why

she runs after me, just to pant

my inaction makes me wanna cry

or just quietly chant

cuz now I'll try

to win her over with my cant

because you're the one I love

and i can't live without

your little lovely emotional shove

which will allow me to shout

you show me my dove

so now I won't pout

you have done enough

to correct my route

you make me weak

for you I'll always remember 

and will be open to think

about things without being a deceiver

we will move onward

forever going forward

Author's Note

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Reviews

[lovergirl]

daaamn , how much i loved this piece! good job , it's really such a beautiful , meaningful emotional poem . nice rhyming btw ;)