Out of Reach

i wrote this for like 10 minutes, so dont be too harsh :D

Somewhere between the screaming and fighting,

we lost ourselves,

we lost the hope,

we lost the love,

we need the most

As i watch him walk away,

I count the steps that he takes,

His silhouette slowly fades away,

as my world turns to gray

Time flies so fast,

since I saw you last,

When you took me in your arms,

I found myself,

I found the hope,

I found the love,

I need the most

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Incredible, stupendous, exceedingly expressive and a few
things that escape me at the moment.
My point is----- this you wrote without excessive reflection, you
just sat down and said what you thought and
that is the purest, untaarnished talent that exists.
Thank you----- More, please.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Mandyy Reed]

This is the best feed back I've gotten, thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told a real story. Easy to create separation with unkind words. Easy for the wise to forgive and find the right place again. A very nice poem. Life ain't easy. Best to be positive and stay away from negative and bad thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mandyy Reed]

Thank you for the king words,Coyote.I'm glad you liked it and took the time to review it.I'm honored.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

This seems very spontaneous...the feelings it conveys seem true...for me, that's what poetry is about.. :-)