Sometimes You Love Someone So Much

A poem i wrote about my breakup.

sometimes you love someone so much you gotta let um go
even though you wanna hold onto um as long an tight as you can
but one day they wake up
an for some reason dont want you around
because of what evers goin on in there life
they second guess
-there love for you
-how much you've grown with them
-every leason (although most the time painful) that they've taught you
-every smile an laugh you've shared
-all the experiences
that are now nothing but a memory you wish would come to life again
an now thats all you have, the memories
in the back of your mind
replaying over an over with no end
because you had to walk away
your hands were tied behind you back
he didnt know anymore
but you did
you love him more than life itself
an everytime he hurt you hurt 10 times more
he didnt realize you could be there for him threw everything
you were there before all this
why not be there threw all of it
because he chose to push you out
he could deal with it on his own
"i need no one","im takeing my space without asking"he said
an you understand
so you give him that
then you realize waiting on him
jus hurts 10 times more than seeing him hurt
because instead of him letting you see him weak,torn,an hurt
he chose to not let you see him at all
an you couldnt let your heart break anymore
yes you care an love him so much
you know he needs his time to think
so you walk away
so he can have that
an you save your heart from all those cuts it was taking

Reviews

[dawnmarie]

a good poem... it has a few minor spelling problems, i can over look that.... the meaning behind the words are beautiful and strong ... nice job !!!!