I know it's lengthy and may not be my best...but it's something that I am struggling with as I type.... I only wish that it wasn't but what can I do...
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I really think this was a good poem. Sure, it was spaced out, but i like the message behind it. Keep writing and eventually you'll feel better, haha, i know i did.
I know how you feel, I've been through hard times with my Dad too, and feeling like no one understood exactly what I felt.
But time moves on and things get better, so just hang in there :)
I really like this, cause it's seems raw, and you expressed the emotions very well, like you always do.
Your emotions definitely show through your writing, which is great. A lot of writers do this to feel better. Keep writing, and hope everything works out okay! If i can help please let me know!
Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in.. more..