I Can't Do It Anymore...

I Can't Do It Anymore...

A Poem by Manda
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She's so depressed... But not even her own dad cares.... To angry to see past her misery

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I can't do it anymore
....
The words
The anger
It all hurts too much

Every little thing I do
Only seems to make you angrier

I tried...
To make you happy

I did everything
You told me to do

But even then
It wasn't enough

Once something went wrong
You only yelled louder

I wish you knew
How much I hate you

But you'll never know
Because if you ever found out

....Who knows
What you might do to me

I needed you
....Especially now

But you never came to help me
Instead you left me hurting inside

I hide away
...Afraid of my own presence

I'm depressed
And you're only making things worse

So stop your bitching
And help me

Because I...
Can't do it

Not alone
....

Not anymore

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
I know it's lengthy and may not be my best...but it's something that I am struggling with as I type.... I only wish that it wasn't but what can I do...

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Wow this has amazing raw emotions. The energy here is also exquisite. I can really feel the longing and the desperation in this poem. Excellent job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes comes a point we can't take it. A powerful poem. I could feel the anger and desire to escape in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really think this was a good poem. Sure, it was spaced out, but i like the message behind it. Keep writing and eventually you'll feel better, haha, i know i did.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is sad. I'm sorry you are having to go through things like this. I hope this gets better. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think it's pretty good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is beautiful. It's not all that long. I liked it, and I hope you don't go through this for much longer. Keep writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I know how you feel, I've been through hard times with my Dad too, and feeling like no one understood exactly what I felt.
But time moves on and things get better, so just hang in there :)

I really like this, cause it's seems raw, and you expressed the emotions very well, like you always do.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's sad but you really did a great job in writing this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good write. Not long at all. This piece carries well and brings the reader through your emotions.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your emotions definitely show through your writing, which is great. A lot of writers do this to feel better. Keep writing, and hope everything works out okay! If i can help please let me know!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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