Forever
A Poem by
Manda
When she thinks she's gone forever.... She really isn't
You’re gone… Forever That’s what they say But are you? **** As I sit upon my windowsill A butterfly swoops to my side It’s wings a bright yellow And its eyes a familiar blue You stare at me Showing no signs of fear I put my hand out Hoping maybe it would climb on And it did! It clasped itself upon my left finger I held up my hand To let it fly away As it did I took one last look Watching it gracefully fly away Into the light blue sky And once it was out of sight It hit me like a bag of rocks! It was her Our beautiful Jeannie! They had been wrong She wasn’t gone She was here to stay Forever....
© 2010 Manda
Author's Note
I wrote this to my family and I who have recently just lost a loved one... Hope it means as much to me as it does to anyone who reads this!
And Jeannie you wont ever be forgotten! We love you so much!
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Posted 13 Years Ago
Very well done. Nice job
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very well done. Nice job
awww im sorry for your loss. but a great write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
awww im sorry for your loss. but a great write.
This was cute. I feel bad for you though. I can relate though. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
This was cute. I feel bad for you though. I can relate though. Thanks for sharing. :)
So sweet and touching, beautiful poem :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
So sweet and touching, beautiful poem :)
This poem is very sweet, and it shows how much you love jeannie, for sure her soul will be somewhere around you, watching you, guiding you, and above all praying for you.... lovely poem once again...
Posted 14 Years Ago
This poem is very sweet, and it shows how much you love jeannie, for sure her soul will be somewhere around you, watching you, guiding you, and above all praying for you.... lovely poem once again...
That's so sweet. I'm glad you write poems that come from your heart. It's so beautiful to read. Well done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
That's so sweet. I'm glad you write poems that come from your heart. It's so beautiful to read. Well done.
Very nice and touching poem. Nice job Manda
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice and touching poem. Nice job Manda
This is a very sweet and touching poem Manda. It does mean a lot especially people who have lost a loved one. Thank you.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is a very sweet and touching poem Manda. It does mean a lot especially people who have lost a loved one. Thank you.
Manda I'm sorry for your lost. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece and I hope all goes well for and your family.
sincerely your friend
Mauricio
Posted 14 Years Ago
Manda I'm sorry for your lost. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece and I hope all goes well for and your family.
sincerely your friend
Mauricio
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Added on August 2, 2010
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Hello! My names Manda. I am 24 years of age and have an Associate of Arts degree. I am a former National Honors Society member and am hoping to continue my education by starting my Bachelors degree in..
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